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Papaya #11

Author: Regret
Rating: PG
Story: Arkadian
Challenge: Papaya #11 - It's Not What It Looks Like
Word Count: 172
Summary: Or for Arkadiy, should that be... 'not what it sounds like?'
Notes: This one turned up in my head and made me laugh... I couldn't resist writing it. Set during a planet-hop where four people are sharing a space made for two and not getting along so well... (Or, in some cases, too well. Apparently.)

"Mm... Oh God that's good..."

Ten smiled and leaned forwards, her breath hot against his shoulder. Her fingers skimmed his skin, then kneaded, and Arkadiy let out another moan. "Is that good?"

"God yes." His voice shook.

She repositioned herself over him and slid her hands across his torso, her touch electric to his taut muscles. "And if I do this...?"

His shuddering gasp masked the sound of the door opening. "May I ask what you are doing so... loudly?"

Vanya's voice was like a slap: Arkadiy jerked at the sound of it, his sharp intake of breath nothing to do with Ten's hands.

Ten slid from astride Arkadiy's back, giving the soldier's backside a firm slap as she hopped from the bed. "I hope that helped." In response to Vanya's raised eyebrow, she added with a wink, "it's been years since I gave anyone a massage."

Arkadiy buried his face in his pillow and fervently wished, as the door closed on Vanya's laugh, that the journey would just be over already.

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bitty1721
Sep. 8th, 2010 10:56 pm (UTC)
LOL...oh, I think I would be either Vanya wondering what the heck is going on or Ten giving a massage he'd never forget. Great piece!
nothingtoregret
Sep. 8th, 2010 11:23 pm (UTC)
Haha, I think Vanya was more... expecting the worst from him. >_> He's not always the best behaved... XD;;

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! ^_^
ichthusfish
Sep. 9th, 2010 02:31 am (UTC)
LOL! I'm sure that was a very good excuse Ten. We'll believe you ;)
nothingtoregret
Sep. 9th, 2010 02:42 pm (UTC)
Oh she was massaging him... >_> He might be laying on his stomach, but I'm not commenting on where her hands might wander... >_>
bookblather
Sep. 9th, 2010 07:26 am (UTC)
Ouch. Hilarious, though. Love Vanya's intrusion and Arkadiy's embarrassment.
nothingtoregret
Sep. 9th, 2010 02:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And I don't think he'll be living it down for the rest of the journey... >_> XD
13066301
Sep. 9th, 2010 08:31 am (UTC)
Haha, poor Arkadiy. And Ten's excuse is just made of win, seriously XDDDDDD
nothingtoregret
Sep. 9th, 2010 02:48 pm (UTC)
I feel sorry for him, mostly 'cause she was just massaging his back. XD Vanya'd been frosty enough on the flight so far, so you can imagine what she'll be like now. XD;;;
ssundaysunday
Sep. 9th, 2010 01:38 pm (UTC)
That was some awesome quick thinking. So great =).
nothingtoregret
Sep. 9th, 2010 03:11 pm (UTC)
That's what Vanya's thinking, but unfortunately for Arkadiy, that really is all Ten was doing. XD; Poor boy, not even getting into trouble for anything fun. XD
smoothiegarten
Sep. 10th, 2010 02:12 am (UTC)
HA. I was half-convinced this was really porn for a minute. Good job.
nothingtoregret
Sep. 10th, 2010 02:34 pm (UTC)
XD Thank you - I really struggle to write porn. XD;; I should probably practice, but maybe it's just more fun making it sound like it. >_> XD
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