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FOTD: Ruction

Author: Regret
Rating: PG
Story: HMG (I found the original title. I cringed at the original title. I'm abbreviating the original title.)
Challenge: FOTD - Ruction
Extras: Pocky
Word Count: 100
Summary: Earlier events lead to words between Janura and (to a much lesser degree) Yirien.
Notes: Yirien really doesn't care. This makes it hard to write... This took far longer than it should.

"What the hell did you think you were doing?!"
Silence.
"You could've killed me!"
Yirien turned the page of his book.
"Weren't you even looking?!"
Silence.
"You did it on purpose!"
A hand gripped his collar. Yirien ignored it.
"You tried to kill me, you little-"
"-It slipped."
"Like hell!" Janura snarled.
"It slipped," he reiterated, reading over Janura's arm.
The hand dragged him upright, a fist inches from his face. "Liar!"
"Believe what you want." He laid the book down carefully. "I don't care."
Ignoring Janura's curses, Yirien prised the fingers from his jacket and strolled away.

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ichthusfish
Aug. 20th, 2010 02:42 am (UTC)
*snickers*

Very nicely written. These type of things are always the hardest :)
nothingtoregret
Aug. 20th, 2010 12:13 pm (UTC)
Trying to fit an idea into 100 words is... @___@ I like the challenge, but it makes my brain ache~ *whine* XD; So, thank you! *spent so long staring at it last night I eventually stopped seeing it...*
smoothiegarten
Aug. 20th, 2010 04:34 am (UTC)
(I found the original title. I cringed at the original title. I'm abbreviating the original title.)

You are not alone. This is how I feel about DW all the time.

Also, I couldn't help snickering. Janura is trying SO HARD to get Yirien to care here, and he just doesn't, bahaha. Awesome.
nothingtoregret
Aug. 20th, 2010 12:09 pm (UTC)
The problem with names is you tend to feel strange about changing them, don't you? :s Mind, I like the title 'Dragon World', actually. ^^;

There are times when I suspect you could detonate a bomb next to Yirien and, once the smoke cleared, he'd still be sat there with a book... >_>;;; I almost feel sorry for Janura at times - and definitely feel sorry for the rest of the crew who have to put up with these two. XD;;
ssundaysunday
Aug. 20th, 2010 05:01 am (UTC)
HMG. Hand Me Grapes. Homeless Mennonite Giants. High Mentor Grappling. This is going to bug me forever now.

I probably shouldn't but I really just like Yirien and how he can't be bothered. He defines "too damn cool to care."
nothingtoregret
Aug. 20th, 2010 11:59 am (UTC)
Haha, I wish it was one of those - particularly the Homeless Mennonite Giants. (High Mentor Grappling gives me strange mental images involving the squad leader...) Unfortunately it's nothing so inventive... "Heavy Metal Generation", which does actually relate to the plot but sounds just... auuugh.

I have to admit to a sneaking soft spot for him too, actually. >_>;; He just kind of decided he was going to be that way, I don't recall consciously choosing for him to be apathetic. :s
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