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Vanilla 21: Dare

Title: Go Ahead Pilgrim
Author: Zombz
Rating: PG13
Notes: Spoiler...ish? Hopefully I left questions unanswered. I wanted to be devilish and make your minds work.


Dom kicked the door in but surprise never etched itself across the man’s face. Only a patronizing smirk. Like this somehow made him the better man.

Dom is covered in blood and vomit and garbage. He isn’t sure which parts of that are his. A fair share of the blood and possibly much of the vomit is for certain.

His gun wobbled in his left hand as he tried to aim. His good arm was no longer good. A bleeding stump he held against his chest that throbbed until he puked his pain away.

“Go ahead. Shoot. I dare you.”

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( 7 comments — Leave a comment )
hi_falootin
Dec. 11th, 2008 09:09 am (UTC)
yikes, this was...eerie! very nice pocky
theoryoferin
Dec. 11th, 2008 03:49 pm (UTC)
Eep! *wonders and worries*
Great job putting so much into this!
shayna611
Dec. 11th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
wow, poor Dom, great piece!

I won't make guesses, because I figure I'd spoil things for others.
sylvrilyn
Dec. 12th, 2008 02:59 pm (UTC)
oh, whoa! Poor Dom!
kage_ankoku
Dec. 16th, 2008 12:43 am (UTC)
Well you've got me guessing. O.O Poor Dom!

Terrific piece.
kitsuneasika
Mar. 12th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
O_O Poor Dom! I wonder what happened....
nathskywalker
Apr. 26th, 2009 08:21 am (UTC)
a little scary.
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