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mocha 14 + pocky - 'don't say a word'

Author: hi_falootin
Prompt: mocha 14. don't you dare
Extra: Pocky
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Notes: Jason's POV. I didn't think I could get this down to 100 words...and then I did!

"Since when do you get all nervous before a date?" Jason figures something out.

Dee's pacing back and forth in the entryway, straightening her shirt, tugging at her hemline, smoothing back her hair.

"What's up with you?" I ask. She doesn't answer.

"Big date?" I guess. "Since when do you get all nervous before a date?"

"It's not a date. I'm just going to this stupid school dance." She stops pacing for a second and looks straight at me. "With Malila."

"Oh." The word crumbles when my mouth drops open. "Oh."

The doorbell rings and Dee looks at me sharply, shaking her head.

"Don't say a word, Jason. Not one fucking word."

I don't.


( 10 comments — Leave a comment )
Oct. 22nd, 2008 11:02 pm (UTC)
nicely written :)

now we must know more about this Malila!
Oct. 22nd, 2008 11:31 pm (UTC)
aw, thank you! Dee and Malila are kind of BFFs so...awkward? XD There will be more Malila soon....
Oct. 22nd, 2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
I'M INTRIGUED! Can't wait to see more in this line...

And the 100 words are all you need. :)
Oct. 22nd, 2008 11:30 pm (UTC)
OH HEY THERE :D thanks for the comment, glad the shortness worked!
Oct. 23rd, 2008 01:21 am (UTC)
Malila...sounds intriguing...

Can't wait for more!
Oct. 23rd, 2008 03:06 am (UTC)
Oct. 23rd, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
Ooh, interest has definitely been piqued. I'm with the others wanting to read more about Malila.
Oct. 23rd, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
thanks! There will be more Malila soon :D (though it may be weird alternate future stuff...hmmm...)
Oct. 23rd, 2008 08:48 pm (UTC)
Nicely short and sweet. Said everything it needed to say. Good job :)
Jan. 5th, 2009 12:08 pm (UTC)
You have this annoying talent to suck me back in just when I want to stop reading to actually do useful stuff.
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