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Passion and Dread

Title: Passion and Dread
Author: Amata le Fay
Story: Force-Benders- Valorverse

Flavor(s): Chocolate Chip Mint 8 (incessant), Pomegranate 4 (wild guess), Dark Chocolate 20 (impotence)

Toppings: Chopped Nuts, Hot Fudge, Whipped Cream

Extras: Pocky

Rating: PG

Word Count: 99

Notes: So, it seems like forever since I've written a Valorverse piece, and so much about Machiatrellos has changed in the canon that I felt I absolutely needed to change him here, too. Concrit welcome.


For the first time, Machiatrellos was powerless.

No matter how hard he tried to resist, she just kept coming back, like cold waves beating and lapping at his feet, the current pulling him underwater when he least expected it. And worst of all, she was always there.

What's wrong?” Despite Machiatrellos's best efforts to keep his discomfort hidden, Mattaso was always able to see straight to the matter. Damn him.

Take a guess,” the boy snarled back. Machiatrellos used to obsess about how enigmatic his sparring partner was, but now he had other things to obsess over.

Like her.


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ichthusfish
Feb. 22nd, 2013 01:31 am (UTC)
Hmm... do we know this mysterious 'her'? Intriguing. Makes me wonder the scope of the spell she has on him. Nicely done :)

One thing - I actually didn't realise the For the first time, Machiatrellos was powerless. was part of the story at first, because it seemed to be a line attached to your notes.
amatalefay
Feb. 22nd, 2013 01:37 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading! And thanks for the note... I'll go back and fix that :)
13066301
Feb. 24th, 2013 02:05 pm (UTC)
Well, whoever "her" is, this is going to be interesting. I'm curious to see where this leads.
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